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Graham Pardun's avatar

Andrew, this is so beautiful, deep, dark...Christopher Alexander says everything is alive, to one degree or another--houses, stones, paintings--and this poem is an example of the truth of that, to a high degree: It seems like it's own plant growing out of the ground. I know you wrote it, but the universe generated it--it's really really real:

"...Miriam mistress of game

Chauvet to Birkenau, warden at the gates

take me through the dark mouth

of the cowry shell strung round my neck,

through the smoke of that birth story,

the wet straw and star-stabbed bleat

around a life willed short, empire to priest,

and the ever pressing god of vine and foreskin..."

Man o man o man....

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Steve's avatar

Andrew, thank you for the beauty and the mystery of this word art. Your creation (as Graham said....universe-generated!) invites me to slow reading...to catalytic reading. I read "Path Word" and didn't "understand" it, however, I recognised the invitation to slow down, to absorb, to read with all of me. I read it once, I read it twice, I read it a third time. Each time was like slowly stepping through the "wardrobe" and I was glimpsing Narnia! I read it again this morning.....and I can see the vistas!

Thank you for attracting me to this art form....you've deepened and expanded my world....it blows me away actually.

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